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you took it
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
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Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:46:03 AM in AEST
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you're my snake
in the garden of eden
you took my sunshine
and replaced it with thunder and lightning
you took my blue skies
and painted them grey
now I live in night
as you stole my day
you took my hope
and left me with fear
making me cry
tear after tear
you stole my heart
then broke it in so many ways
yet I'll keep on loving you
'till the end of my days
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2005-09-27 08:46:03]
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Re: you took it
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by mjh0813 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:36:30 AM AEST
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this was a good write.. i can totaly relate to how you feel...i been there more than once and it's very hard to let someone you love go but deep inside your heart you still love them even after what they did...keep writing!
peave and love
meg |
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Re: you took it
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by angel_eyes70 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:12:18 AM AEST
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Oh thats good poem!! And dont worry, we've all been there
*Hugs and kisses*
Kimmy |
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Re: you took it
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by gwenevere on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:15:56 PM AEST
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| A sad poem.No point iin loving someone who can only give you pain.Give him the old heave ho and start again, Ros |
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Re: you took it
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by jono on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 08:19:34 AM AEST
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you obviously have a huge heart for love
great poem |
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Re: you took it
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 05:52:35 PM AEST
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this is a good write.
luvs ya!
jess |
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