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I want out
Contributed by
Caged Soul
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 07:51:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Too long have you tried to keep me in,
inseperatable we’ve been for too long.
Loving each other, hiding in each other.
No longer can this charade continue, I need out.
We’ve had some good times, our lives intertwined,
inseperatable, for dare we part – we set
in motion the start of judgement, segregation.
Unbeknown to us, blinded by our love,
my life flew away like a dove,
blackened by our love, devoted.
I need salvation from this self-entrapment, I need
To be liberated from this social oppression,
Of this fake love, I need out.
As if you’re ashamed of me, you hide me from others.
Leave me behind when you go out.
You tell me its better this way.
Well….this time as you leave, you’d be
doing so without the key, no more coming back,
cuz now it’s my turn.
I’m coming out and letting everyone know
Ash is back.
My soul glowing with a new found pride.
Copyright ©
Caged Soul
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2005-09-27 07:51:05]
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Re: I want out
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:36:39 AM AEST
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| WOW... this is really good...I am sorry for your lost relationship, I hope all is getting better...Wonderful write...Shari |
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Re: I want out
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by mjh0813 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:39:58 AM AEST
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if this person ever said they love you then why would they be ashamed to show you off to others? i been there but i left i couldnt stand him going out and saying "oh well its better like this" good write i loved it!
peace and love
meg |
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Re: I want out
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:59:17 AM AEST
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WOW
aboslutely amazing
you are a terrific writer...hope to hear more from you
I think we all have internal struggles like this...even if not all of us verbalize or writer about it
~Bethani~ |
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Re: I want out
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:29:55 AM AEST
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This is a good, raw and determined write. Making a positive change is always good. I like the emotional spill, you conveyed your message well.
Scorp. |
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Re: I want out
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by miss_jules on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 01:30:24 PM AEST
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| Excellent display of honesty and emotion. Wonderful poem. |
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