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End this.
Contributed by
Lollypopxcore
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 02:28:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Inside, this is tearing me up
I'm not an easy one to love
but you're right there in front of me
that's when my heart starts going crazy
Sometimes it stops so suddenly
you're the one who overtook me
is a chance to much to ask for
Silence is screaming at my heart
So I tare my skin apart
Just thinking how nice it would be to hold you
All you see is smiles
When I'm filling up with hate
I just know that I'm not good enough
And i fear that I'm too late
And I can't tell anyone how much it hurts...
Shoot me.
End this.
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Lollypopxcore
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2005-09-27 02:28:08]
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Re: End this.
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by Evening_Star on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:55:35 AM AEST
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When I read this I can feel your pain and hurt.
liz |
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Re: End this.
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:48:39 AM AEST
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| This is a very honest write. I don't think I want to put myself in that position. It must be very hard. IOn a personal note I do not think you should use the names of your loved ones in your poetry or title even if it is just the first name. I think they should be protected. |
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