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Heart-on-SleeveItis
Contributed by
SunflowersAndTea
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:11:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Unlonely thought my thoughts lie here,
They spin of web of tears to shed,
While passion blurs inside of fear,
And caution cries inside my head.
Watch shoulders bare with empathy,
See my arm, now ragged and lame,
For it has known its misery:
It's pleasing love is all to blame.
For there it beats, and so it lies,
That element of woe,
But let me ask, would it be wise,
If perhaps, it were not so?
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Re: Heart-on-SleeveItis
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:49:06 AM AEST
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I'd lie if I said I understood most of this one, but I still like it. I love the beginning line of the second stanza. Great visual.
Well done.
Take care.
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Re: Heart-on-SleeveItis
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by WAE on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 01:24:40 PM AEST
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| Curious one... A puzzle for the reader... |
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