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What Used to Be

Contributed by Khadrane on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 12:17:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You were my friend, you made me smile.
For you I would have walked a thousand miles.
I would have been there through the years, through the tears.
I would have helped you through all your trials.

Your eyes made me grin, your smile made me melt;
I never knew I could feel the way that I felt.
Dreams coming true made me think of you,
And I couldn’t believe the fortune I’d been dealt.

I should’ve seen it coming, but I was too blind-
You had always been so thoughtful and kind.
I never expected I’d be rejected
The shock of it all baffled my mind.

I couldn’t believe it, but I knew it was true.
I was no longer important to you.
I tried not to cry or wonder why
But it still hurt that you found someone new.

I try to ignore it; I can’t let you know,
But these emotions are just so hard not to show.
I gave you my heart, you tore it apart,
And now I must learn how to let go.

Copyright Â© Khadrane ... [ 2005-09-27 00:17:50]
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Re: What Used to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by mjh0813 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:43:40 AM AEST
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great wirte....be strong and hold your head up...thats all i can really say....
if you ever wanna chat if you have yim (yahoo instant messanger) then add me
mjh_0813@yahoo.com
peace and love
meg

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