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Collide
Contributed by
xxnights_childxx
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:35:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want you and I need you but I just can't have you,
I'm running out of ideas, I don't know what to do,
It's not the right time for fate to come into play,
And I can't seem to satisfy this longing any other way,
I always want to know, what you think about every night,
What makes you smile, and what you'd stand up against to fight,
Do you ever dream of me, or feel my soul reaching out to yours?
I'm calling out to you more now, opening up the portal doors,
And when you're sad it makes me cry, but you don't have to hide,
I share your sadness my darling, because I can feel it deep inside,
If only I could tell you that I love you, I'd whipe away your tears,
Replace all of the hurt with love, and erase all of the wasted years,
And whenever I finally find you, I promise to never ever let go,
Although I don't even know you yet, I love you more than you know,
A bond that has been broken, and stolen away by the sands time,
I cant feel that it's only a matter of days now, until I make you mine,
The clock will tick it's seconds, and the waves will crash against the shore,
It's only a glance into the future, until we become one once more,
And it's then that we'll be complete, without a worry or a care,
You wont have to worry again, because I'll always be there,
So this is my "I love you" for now, theres nothing else I can say,
But I'll be able to tell you personally, when we collide some day.
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Re: Collide
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by ForlornSapphire on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:34:51 PM AEST
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| Wow! Beautifully written. Phenominal job at expressing your emotions. I have written a poem that is similar to this theme. Very nice, Keep writing! |
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Re: Collide
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by ArsenicMyst on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:27:47 AM AEST
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you know ... i really liked your poem ...
i ~was~ going to make a suggestion ...
but then i quickly read a few of your other poems
and decided it wasnt necessary
you know what you are doing
nice work
arsenic*.¸¸.·´¨`*
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Re: Collide
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by toddy29 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:58:07 AM AEST
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| This is wonderful work! I personally know where you are coming from in this poem. I write poems about the same things all the time. But I just think, it's only a matter of time until those poems will be reality instead of hope. Keep up the good work! |
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