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Chasing the Darkness
Contributed by
AshRayne
on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:28:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hunting.
I glace around,
Hoping to find the shadow.
Searching.
My fury leads,
This search with no mercy.
Tracking.
Unrelenting Passion.
Coming for the kill.
No more torment.
No more pain,
As I chase away,
The Darkness.
Chasing.
Longing to end,
That which tortures me.
Probing.
Searchlight,
Find my stalker.
Tracing.
Shadow,
Haunt me no more.
Freedom,
Sanctuary, I come,
Just let me finish,
Chasing the darkness.
Copyright ©
AshRayne
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2005-09-26 21:28:27]
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Re: Chasing the Darkness
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 11:53:26 PM AEST
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Kind of simple, but I liked it, it reminds of
some stuff I wrote when I was really battling
depression. Stay strong and don't let it
overwhelm you.
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Re: Chasing the Darkness
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by strider on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 12:02:23 PM AEST
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| Cool, very smooth lines and you know what you please keep this style you may just be the king of smooth poetry |
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Re: Chasing the Darkness
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by ArsenicMyst on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:11:13 AM AEST
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i like it a lot ...
its the kind of text book poem ...
that allows one as reader to free up
some of their own brain matter,
so the reader can use their own inner vision and imagination,
rather than being forced into trying to figure out
what the parallax convolusions of the writer's are.
(or was that too, too convoluted if a thought?)
good job
¸·:·»arsenic
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Re: Chasing the Darkness
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by ChibiMiroku on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:27:47 PM AEST
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Nicely done!
Interesting format of poetry, but its definately original. Good descriptions....I can almost picture myself there. =D |
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Re: Chasing the Darkness
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 06:41:01 PM AEST
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Hmmm...I like the concept behind this write, and the style you've written it in. Thought provoking and emotive. Nicely done!
Scorp. |
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