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this game we play
Contributed by
eloise
on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you said you would ring me
you promised youd call
ive given you everything
ive given my all
what are we playing
i dont want to play
please tell me the rules
ive got something to say
it just isnt fair
i dont know what to do
what is it youre waiting for?
should i call you?
i send you messages
i wonder if youre home
are you thinking of me?
as i sit by the phone
last night you told me
that you didnt know me well
but that you loved me, cared for me
it was then that i fell
you dont want to lose me
yet you treat me like trash
i wish i could tell you
what i want to at last
that i quit this dumb game
that im no longer 'in'
whats the point in my playing?
when theres no way i can win?
i dont know the rules
i dont know the score
i dont know why you insist
on talking to me anymore
eventually youll call
just not when you said
what the **** is your problem?
whats going on in your head?
ive waited all day
i no longer care
when i need you
you are never there
i wish you would just tell me
that its not me and you
i wish you would do the thing
im not strong enough to do.
Copyright ©
eloise
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2003-01-18 14:00:00]
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Re: this game we play
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 04:37:41 PM AEST
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| This is me to a T - love your poem Eloise ... great flow, great words. I don't understand either why they say the words but don't use the actions - I've come to believe that it's all about being in control and enjoying the power of it all. I hope you draw on some strength somewhere and put him in his place. ..... best of luck DreamWeaver |
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Re: this game we play
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 07:02:11 PM AEST
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| WOW this is great, i love it. this is almost exactly what i am going thru at the moment with my friend that i like. he says he loves me but is with another girl, wont break up with her even tho she cheats on him, still reckons he loves me tho, asked me out, i said yes, he said no ive changed my mind but i still love you. guys are crazy i reckon. well most new zealand guys i know anyhow. but anyway thanx for sharing, this was a great write. |
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Re: this game we play
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by faffeee on
Friday, 18th July 2003 @ 04:59:39 PM AEST
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| oh my god, just like everyone else has said, you have captured this scenario so so perfectly! i know it was a while ago that you wrote thos and so hopefully you've escaped this awful never ending cycle and pattern that drives people CRAZY! i was stuck in it from January to only a few weeks ago but somehow i think i have moved on...your poem rings true in everyway, its taken the feelings right out of my heart!!! xxx |
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