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Better Off Dead
Contributed by
xxSuicidalChickxx
on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:48:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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im so tired of feeling like this
feeling like i dont exist
when all i ever do is cry
feeling like i want to die
another teardrop rolling from my eyes
here is where another drop of blood lies
your just another reason for me to bleed
i dont care what you say its you i need
another place, another time
another cut, another line
maybe you can make this cycle end
this broken heart needs to mend
i need your help i cant do it alone
this broken heart needs to be sewn
ill be the needle youll be the thread
we can sew it together or im better off dead
if this doesnt work out then im sorry to say
i just wont be able to make it through another day
you can say your sorry you can say goodbye
it wont matter anymore ill want to die
and i know that you wont miss me at all
i know you wont try to catch me as i fall
when i take this gun and shoot myself in the head
i knew no one would ever want me i knew id be better off dead
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Re: Better Off Dead
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by AshRayne on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:33:02 PM AEST
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No one, I repeat, NO ONE, is better off dead. every person in this cruel world has the right to live, and though life is not always grand, there is always a silver lining.
The temptress striking, i must say, hats off to you, though im not british. Well met.
Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection
~Ash |
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Re: Better Off Dead
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by mjh0813 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:51:43 AM AEST
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i really loved this write!......"ill be the needle and you'll be the thread" ...thats my fave line! keep writing and i know how your feeling happend to me not to long ago...
peace and love
meg |
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Re: Better Off Dead
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by strider on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:14:50 AM AEST
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| I really hope you dont intend to die, that this work is simply an art form. I really hope that you dont intend to die. Anyway, it is a well written poem; KUDOS |
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