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THINKING OF YOU
Contributed by
HAPPIE
on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:40:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I KEEP LOOKING OF YOUR PICTURE
I DONT EVEN KNOW WHAT TO DO
EVERY SECOND I THINK OF YOU
THESE FEELINGS TAKEN OVER MY BODY
I CANT CONTROLL MY GREATEST SECRET UNKNOWN
IS TO LOVE YOU AND I DONT HAVE TO BE OLD
YOU ARE MY FIRST LOVE MY GREATEST DREAM COME TRUE
I HOPE YOU KNOW I'LL DO ANYTHING FOR YOU
Copyright ©
HAPPIE
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2005-09-26 20:40:33]
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Re: THINKING OF YOU
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by Archie on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:45:41 PM AEST
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| This is good. It must be a proclamation of love since you used all caps. This is your way of shouting it to the world |
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Re: THINKING OF YOU
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by mjh0813 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:09:21 AM AEST
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this is a good write...i do have advice foryou though.......BE CAREFUL!......i had a first love and it all went to hell!! just pleasebe careful!
peace and love
meg |
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