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Silent Mind
Contributed by
candysears
on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:35:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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The silence of one's voice
Very seldom heard
Locked down deep within
One's soul
Afraid of showning any expression
Of feeling~
Yet keep his cry hidden deep
Within
Know emotion ever found on
His face
A smile and being the rock for
All to lean
Cry's fill the hole so big inside,
Wanting to burst out with all emotion
Felt~
But kept hidden from all to see,
Him being the strong rock to keep
The family togather and safe
Know one notice any pain or any
Change he has made
His mind waving like the wind
But, yet know one ever heard his
Silent cry~
Crying out for help to save his
Mind From insanity torment
To fight the insane mind that is
Growning stronger by the day
Silent tears flows so freely
Within
Mind so shatter until his fate
Has arouse just to decline with the
In evitable line of insanity
Has cross
His fate lyies only for his self dismies
Weakening mind cry out for help not
knowning his fate already taken over,
His crys was to late
Silence has locked him within
The walls without an exit
His mind know longer his
Now,
Locked deep down in a pit of
Psychotic state
Copyright ©
candysears
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2005-09-26 20:35:27]
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Re: Silent Mind
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by ArsenicMyst on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:50:27 PM AEST
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candy this poem so intense ...
its so hard to find the words to describe it ...
to respond to it ...
that one is inclined to turn away from it
which announces its truth ... so tragically locked away
however ... i hear it
*´¨`·.¸¸.*arsenic
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Re: Silent Mind
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:32:31 PM AEST
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Powerful and very deep write.I could feel the tension and anguish all the way through
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