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Leaves In The Cold
Contributed by
Arwen
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Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lost in contemplation, I sit looking out the window yet not 'seeing'.
It takes a couple seconds to impact
And when it does it's too late...he's gone.
And yet the image remains
Of him running with childish wonder...
with this inexplainable exuberant happiness
That I could only wish to someday find.
Rebellious touchable hair that exhibit the freedom that he evidently posesses and enjoys.
That feeling of freedom that i'm obviously still looking for...
Unseen obstacles hold me back and
I'm caught in this colourful confusing abyss,
clueless to the direction to take to find true fulfillment.
That one almost dream-like second,
that glimpse of what I'm missing,
Of what I'm LETTING myself ignore,
Is deeply rooted to this urge to forget.
To not feel.
Copyright ©
Arwen
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2003-01-18 13:40:00]
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Re: Leaves In The Cold
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 01:10:54 AM AEST
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I've had moments like this... was this those wierd moments where your brain takes like a picture? Then u remember it for a long time?
This was interesting and enjoyable.
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Re: Leaves In The Cold
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by OreO on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 01:06:41 PM AEST
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.Absolutely beautiful..... welcome to YPDC...i look forward to reading more of your poetry Arwen....thanks for sharing this one...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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