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To Those Who Cared
Contributed by
Darkhorse71
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:00:49 PM in AEST
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I hated myself as I hated my life,
I only knew pain and shame and strife.
I didn’t know love and had no way
to make it through each lonely day.
As a teen I tried to end how I feel,
but I was taken in by a friend to heal.
It hurts that I can’t tell her today
how much she helped me on my way.
I learned to trust because of her,
a little bit, but I was sure
that maybe there was hope for me,
there was a spark that I could see.
I met a man who was good it seemed,
who asked for help to coach his team.
He somehow saw inside and then
he started acting like a friend.
He never judged me and because
he accepted me the way I was
I learned to trust yet once again,
and owe my future to those friends.
He was always there when things were bad,
I stayed with him whenever I had
a fight at home and had to flee,
he accepted me with his family.
Whenever I’m feeling bad I see
there’s always someone there for me.
It’s often one I do not know
who reaches out to help me so.
Especially my little evil friend
has helped me more then all of them.
She’s been honest, her words are true.
and she has helped me through and through.
Because these people cared to show
what love can do, I learned to grow.
I only wish that they could see
how much their love has meant to me.
darkhorse71
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Re: To Those Who Cared
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:08:51 PM AEST
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I feel quite sure they know. Actions generally speak much louder than words and come through so much more clearly. There always seems to be just the right person in the right place at the right time when one is in dire straits. Miracle, hmmm, I wonder??
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Re: To Those Who Cared
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by brew on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:39:53 PM AEST
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Well, i am sure those friends, know how much you care.and much you are worth. You think that one lil evil, friend, did more.........?! Hm.......Seems, the evil, is more than that. If a person , shows they are what they truly tell, then no one can turn that away. Thanks for sharing this lovely write.! You are a good friend........:)
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Re: To Those Who Cared
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:05:17 PM AEST
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very beautiful write.TOuched me deeply. Im sure they know how you feel.They are terue gems and rare to find
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Re: To Those Who Cared
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by strider on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:40:19 AM AEST
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In your own words
"Whenever I’m feeling bad I see
there’s always someone there for me.
It’s often one I do not know
who reaches out to help me so".
I think you are a lucky person, to have had all these people by you when it mattered most
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Re: To Those Who Cared
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by Loende on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 01:21:37 PM AEST
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Brava. This is a great piece. And I agree that these people probably know just how much you love and care about them. The best of friends usually do.
Be well,
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Re: To Those Who Cared
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 12:46:08 PM AEST
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Lovely write here
we always looking for the words to say and you seem to just make then flow without knowing you touching others in ways left unsaid..
your writes really hit home and I tysvm for sharing..
I am sure they know how you feel... if not send them this write..
Huggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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