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God In The Park
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:42:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Majestic giant oak trees scattered about
A picturesque landscape, in the park throughout
The pond with it's spewing water fountain
Sitting there like a giant baptismal font
The band shell, old time music did provide
Later shelter and an alter for the Holy host and wine to reside
We prayed and beckoned Jesus to be near
Present in this holy atmosphere
The warm sun flickered in the mammoth trees
Accompanied by a refreshing breeze
An aura of distorted time and dimension took place
Under nature's canopy love embraced
There seemed to be a spiritual presence
Followed by a heightened sense of His essence
I experienced an awesome mystical sensation
And felt like I was observing a glimpse of creation
Here in the beauty of the park
A vision of people mingling ln old-fashioned garb
It was as if I were peering into a bubble
Which seemed peaceful, without any troubles
All interaction became more subdued
Movement seemed to be slow and very skewed
A silence ensued from which there was no escape
"Surely The Presence" of the Lord was in this place
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Willofree
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Re: God In The Park
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:05:04 PM AEST
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Great imagery, Will...and such a beautiful, inspiring poem... Loved it.
Thanks for sharing..
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Re: God In The Park
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by Archie on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:06:52 PM AEST
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| That is a good write. I am glad you had a good expirience. |
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Re: God In The Park
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:11:50 PM AEST
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The feeling here is very intense. How wonderful to have experienced such passion in such a beautiful surrounding. Miracles do happen. Always believe.
Rita |
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Re: God In The Park
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:42:19 PM AEST
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Wow Will...you truly brought this experience to life...such vivid imagery, with good rhyming and flow that didn't impede the story at all. Very well done, and what a pleasant day that must have been! Excellent write. Thanks for sharing: )
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Re: God In The Park
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:59:55 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful write...I hope to have such an experience one day! You told of your experience so magically...loved it...Shari |
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Re: God In The Park
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 07:56:26 AM AEST
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God is where you believe Him to be as He is with you always... and in your write He definatly was there....yes keep believing.....God is waiting always....
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Re: God In The Park
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:30:02 PM AEST
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Very believable poem. Yes, call on Him, you will see many beautiful things..
Raquel Leah :D |
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