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The Eye
Contributed by
anitajames
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:13:47 PM in AEST
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There's an eye in this room that won't let me be.
Wherever I hide,
it continues to see.
Shamed and embarrassed
I just can't be free.
I'm stunned to discover it belongs to me.
Copyright ©
anitajames
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2005-09-26 18:13:47]
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Re: The Eye
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by Archie on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:32:47 PM AEST
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| That is a good way of putting it. Great write. Our biggest negative voice often comes from within us. |
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Re: The Eye
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by strider on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 07:55:12 AM AEST
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| Simply fantastic, I am impressed |
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Re: The Eye
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by strider on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 07:55:13 AM AEST
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| Simply fantastic, I am impressed |
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Re: The Eye
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:25:03 AM AEST
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I do know what you mean, this is stunning! I praise you for it. I've felt like that so many times.
Well done.
Take care |
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