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Memories
Contributed by
remote
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:26:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Memories
let me pack them up
and put them away
all very carefully.
Next time I see you
I will open those
every little bundle
and share them with you.
Memories
of sharing memories;
I'll pack those too,
especially for me.
I shall open them
every last one of them
when you're not with me
Ah sweet memories.
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Re: Memories
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by AllyBaba on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:55:19 PM AEST
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| i like this one a lot. because i can relate to this kind of a poem. nicee. |
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Re: Memories
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 04:29:40 PM AEST
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| Really great concept with this one. Not at all cliched either, and I agree that it was pretty easy to relate to, and it was nice to relate to it too. Great piece. |
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Re: Memories
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by brew on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:34:46 PM AEST
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Just for you "j" what if they are bad.throw in the trash?!
Good write, and yes, memories..........some or great and some I hate.!
Loved this
Brew~ |
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Re: Memories
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:14:22 PM AEST
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Well, some things are worth keeping anyway...Nice job with this write: )
Scorp. |
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Re: Memories
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by ArsenicMyst on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:39:51 PM AEST
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~nods in thought~ ...
we store the good ones along with the bad ...
all treasured, in their own special way
very nice
*·.¸¸¸¸.·*arsenic
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