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Labrynka
Contributed by
Archie
on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:00:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Welcome to the fabled port of Madrigal by the sea
Sitting on the continent Labrynka vast and free
Enchanted forests lie to the west to enter if you dare
Curs'ed mazes take up space in cities everywhere
Corban the young prince of the land with his knight Sir Gilfred
Try to figure out what tries to overcome his cities
I will not give too much away I'll guess you'll have to read
about the many tests they face to set their homeland free
Barter in the markets
watch the children play
see the seagulls flying
catching fish for prey
hear the clanging metal
as knights spar and joust
see the creeping forests
to the west and south
Sail upon the sea
to places of adventure
from Madrigal
as far as Nentarden
Cities burned with fire
by dragon's angry wrath
Thaeon and Driscol
now are serpant lands
Olivander plaqued by pirates
Remisen is plaqued by trees
All within Labrynka
The Isle of mystery
Copyright ©
Archie
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2005-09-26 09:00:49]
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Re: Labrynka
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:25:00 AM AEST
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Well done! I would really like to read it whjen you're done.
Take care.
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Re: Labrynka
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by maestar on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:49:11 AM AEST
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GREAT poem, sounds like a good book.
I love fantasy stories set in the olden days.
well done
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Re: Labrynka
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 02:40:19 PM AEST
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Oh Archie, how lovely, yes, I will be reading the rest of those stories, I do hope you finish them all.
You are a wonderful writer, I love the poem trailer, it is a nice review to what you are working on.
Huggs from me,
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Labrynka
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 05:32:07 PM AEST
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what a wonderful imagineation you have.
A very awsome fantasy story cant wait to read more
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Re: Labrynka
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:44:42 PM AEST
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WoW Archie this is sensational. I can't wait to read ur book. Talent shining through every word u write dear friend.
I love reading about enchanted forests, dragons and knights etc. Keep penning dearest Archie.
Hugs,
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Re: Labrynka
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by Willofree on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:01:12 PM AEST
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Very appealing and intreguing story; and fun images brought out when reading the unique story....wonderful imagery. Seems to trigger the imagination.
Well done, Archie
Will |
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Re: Labrynka
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:25:37 PM AEST
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This sounds absolutely mesmerizing. I can only hope you put the show on to post soon for us.
Rita |
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