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trembling hands
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 05:57:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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With trembling hands I say I love you.
And I hug you one last time.
With a shakey voice I say goodbye.
And the tears flow again.
And my heart gives an almighty tug.
I never thought saying I loved you would hurt so bad.
I never thought it would come time to say goodbye.
Theres many things i wish,
Wish I never did
Wish I never said
Wish I did more of
Wish I said more often...
I just wish it didnt have to end.
Or that it didnt have to hurt so much.
But I guess thats true love ending.
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2005-09-26 05:57:03]
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Re: trembling hands
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:03:00 AM AEST
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Very touching write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: trembling hands
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:35:14 AM AEST
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Concentrated emotions...purified and distilled.
Most certainly emotive and clear in message.
A beautiful piece. |
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Re: trembling hands
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:33:22 AM AEST
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It's excruciating sometimes to have to say goodbye and
be left with nothing but wishes and questions.
I feel your pain in every line. A well written piece.
~Breezy
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