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Mermaid Dreams
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:26:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Sleepy is the mermaid, on the ocean bed
Oyster shell her resting place, lays her weary head
Sea horses her guardians, waiting for her call
Such a lovely maiden, delicate and small
Gently she then closes eyes and drifts slowly away
Finds herself in dreamland, a place, another day
A handsome prince is waiting there, just to take her hand
And on her finger places a sea pearl and gold band
He kisses her and tells her his love for her is true
That he will stay for ever in sea of aqua blue
But consciousness is pulling her and telling her to wake
Poor sweet gentle mermaid, she feels her heart wil break
She wakes and cries so softly, her love she left behind
Was just Imagination, a figment in her mind
Mermaid dreams of true love, a wish of what could be
She thinks that she will be alone for all eternity
Then suddenly, she rubs her eyes, is she asleep again?
Her prince is right before her, oh, is it really him
He broke the chains of dreamland, to be with her once more
For ever they will be now, and rule the sea and shore
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Re: Mermaid Dreams
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:41:02 AM AEST
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Such a beautifull, creative write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Mermaid Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:13:32 AM AEST
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So sweet and lovely. A fantasy well written
and a most beautiful dream. Well done!
~Breezy |
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Re: Mermaid Dreams
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by Archie on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 12:27:25 PM AEST
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| This is very positive. This reminds me somewhat of Peter Pan |
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Re: Mermaid Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 12:30:33 PM AEST
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This was the first poem i read this morning
waht a perfect way 2 start the day, this is absolute lovely wow now this, is poetry . . .
Ben |
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Re: Mermaid Dreams
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by remote on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 02:36:20 PM AEST
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| Lovely poem. |
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Re: Mermaid Dreams
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 04:22:29 PM AEST
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Now this is a lovely fairytale. Got anymore like this???
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Re: Mermaid Dreams
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by ArsenicMyst on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:31:31 PM AEST
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*
a lovely dream within a dream ...
`·.¸·:·» Arsenic
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