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Breathing
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daniel
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Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
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I don't really like this, though I'm trying to fight this
what can I do now, I've done all I can do now
I'm sick of all the fighting, its not all that inviting
my head is all in pain, I've got plenty on my brain
I can't mistake you
I can't escape you
I need some substance, to get me through the day
breathing the very essence, to live each and every day
the day is never ending, the wasted time is spending
what can I do now, I've done all I can do now
poker face I cannot deal, is this game oh so real
the blood is rushing on, I guess I'll just play along
I can't mistake you
I can't escape you
life's too short to waste it away
I can't waste another day
living, breathing, dying, trying
do all I can to keep from not flying
what can keep me down on the ground
but myself when no one is around
I don't really like this, though I'm trying to fight this
what can I do now, I've done all I can do now
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daniel
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2003-01-18 12:00:00]
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Re: Breathing
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by OreO on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 05:48:03 PM AEST
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Breath in, Breath out, live a little, enjoy, ..i dont see how this could be any more explanatory than that...just breath..always breath...if ever one stops breathing..the air becomes thick with shadows and fog.....beautiful write daniel...as always ...love this one...
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Re: Breathing
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 07:19:30 PM AEST
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I love your third verse... at least I think it's the third verse... the one that starts "life's too short to waste it away...." so true...Very good write as always! :)
Catch ya later,
~Dani~ |
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