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Poet_of_anger
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:09:49 PM in AEST
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The pathway in front of me
It goes two ways
One is covered in a dense fog
what should I do
I'm so happy
With myself
Nothing is wrong
Today I'm ok
The people that surround me
They don't know
The things that haunt me
Take control
I'm so happy
With myself
Nothing is wrong
Today I'm ok
My life is an uncertainty
Could end today
All the words I've spoken
Slowly drift away
I'm so happy
With myself
Nothing is wrong
Today I'm ok
The other path is sunny
Easy to look down
It looks like it is cheerful
What should I do
I'm so happy
With myself
Nothing is wrong
Today I'm ok
The pathway in front of me
It goes two ways
One is covered in a dense fog
That one I choose
I'm so happy
Oh I'm so happy
With myself
I'm so happy
With myself
Nothing is wrong
Today I'm ok
Ok, today
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Re: Today
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:22:04 PM AEST
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This is simply DELIGHTFUL!
No self-rightiousness, no deception, simply stating as it is!
Without giving lectures nor preachy words.
Just say so as it is.
Shall I call this approachig perfection?
Most of us cover inadequacies up, but you present them with a bravery that cannot but win the hearts.
KUDOS!
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Re: Today
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by brew on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:31:06 PM AEST
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Hmmmmmm fog, or sun? Well, i suggest, that you go with the sun....that path seesm you will get more, and deserve what is waiting.! The fog, is one, that may seem to be the right one, yet its there to lead to bad.! the work, you have written is good, and deep..........follow that correct path...it will be boring to you in the beginning, yet bring so much more.......
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Re: Today
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 04:38:14 AM AEST
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Very good uplifting write.
I like the way u have confidence in yourself that no matter what is on the foggy path u will get thru it.
Great work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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