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My Willing Love
Contributed by
childsFaith46
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 07:11:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Laying in bed, alone at night
dreaming of you and me, with the stars so bright
Longing for a paradise, with no one around
you holding me close, near the ocean sounds
Waiting for the day when we don't have to hide
when they won't care if I'm by your side
when no one will notice what I am
and when I'm around I'll just blend in
I don't know how long it will be
for this dream to become a reality
I know it will happen, just you wait
there will be no rumors, with no hate
till then I'll always think of you
with a willing love forever ture
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Re: My Willing Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Scarletrayne on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 07:15:04 PM AEST (User
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Sweet, as long as you love eachother thats all that matters. |
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Re: My Willing Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 07:22:04 PM AEST (User
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beautiful write, time to make a candlelight dinner for the chap and or call him up, nice love letter here as a poem, to me anyway. Loved it. Tender dreaming.
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: My Willing Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 08:16:37 PM AEST (User
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Well hope it works, for you. When in "love" we all deseeve, happines. And yes what Raquel suggested as well.maybe keeping it, light, could be an answer. Nice write.
Brew~ |
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Re: My Willing Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by JenJen on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:23:18 AM AEST (User
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this poem is perfect well done i hope things work out for you and your boyfriend
all my hope
jenni
xxxx |
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Re: My Willing Love
(User Rating: 1 ) by kcampbell on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:33:13 AM AEST (User
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Ver y sweet, you should keep writing. Thanks so much for the comment. =hugs= |
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