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Thunder and Beethoven
Contributed by
ForlornSapphire
on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:06:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sit on the floor
In a dimly lit room.
All I hear
Is the sound of thunder and Beethoven,
And all I feel
Is my hear bitterly weeping,
Mourning the paths I am on as of current
And fearing the paths I have yet to journey.
As each measure
Builds upon it's former
Turning shallow tones to music;
Gently caressing the surrounding atomsphere
Growing... swelling to a climax,
Resulting with an orgasmic, calming tension,
Followed by serenity.
Immeditately after: sorrow.
As I lift my head
Toward a small window,
I look out into the beautifully black night.
The sorrow forced upon me
By the conclusion of Moonight.
And though I am too weak to cry,
One silent tear
Slips hopelessly to the ground.
Again I raise my head
And look out the tiny window.
This time to see
A solitary ray of light
Piercing the shrouding of darkness.
Then, I simply close my eyes.
I become still
And I know...
Oh, how I know!
And I find comfort there.
Copyright ©
ForlornSapphire
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2005-09-25 15:06:23]
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Re: Thunder and Beethoven
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by upomik on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:24:51 PM AEST
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| excellent use of imagery and my favorite composer. :-) |
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Re: Thunder and Beethoven
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:42:30 PM AEST
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Very good
GODBLESS
BEBE |
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Re: Thunder and Beethoven
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:27:40 PM AEST
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The title had me very intrigued and I was not disappointed.
This was an amazing write. Very powerful emotions, expertly
expressed!
And I know...
Oh, how I know!
And I find comfort there
Exceptional!
~Breezy |
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Re: Thunder and Beethoven
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by Scarletrayne on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:51:33 PM AEST
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| Great write, I can relate. Can't wait for more. |
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Re: Thunder and Beethoven
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by brew on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:54:48 PM AEST
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I use classic music all the time, to study by, read, by and write.by. never to think by, but sure its the same. yes, and a night with rain and thunder..... Well, it ws a deep write, find more.and you can see light.......
Brew~ |
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Re: Thunder and Beethoven
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 07:35:28 PM AEST
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A sad emotional piece of poetry. U draw the reader in through the sensational imagery u cast into the readers head. A very well crafted write. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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