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Time well spent by a Himalayan lake
Contributed by
remote
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:05:34 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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When at a highland lake
sit there, spend couple of hours
in a mountain silence
enjoy few breaths of pure air
You could be there in early mornings
when gentle breeze is still chilly
and the surface of the lake
is still draped in a mysterious mist
You could spend an afternoon
when shadows are short,
and sun hangs high above
making every wavelets glimmer
Water is always crystal clear
still, it will never be known
what secrets stay unrevealed
and depth, you can just attempt a guess
On a moonlit nights
its quite a different place altogather:
You'd see strange shapes never seen before
forming and melting there on darkened surface
Its not about just the ripples on the lake,
sounds or shapes, imagined or real
Its about just being there
letting your thoughts discover its own depth
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Re: Time well spent by a Himalayan lake
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by ArsenicMyst on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:12:44 PM AEST
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well hi there ...
irrepressible remote ...
i love this poem ...
its really quite beautiful
for someone as cynical as thouest ... H........a!
another reason why i like it
is because you use some of the same words
i use in one of mine which i was considering to post ...
tho the concepts are very different ...
and, that your spelling is better here too!
have a wonderful day ...
i really enjoyed this
Arsenic .¸¸.·*
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Re: Time well spent by a Himalayan lake
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by judasman on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:49:12 PM AEST
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| nice write. provokes an image of peace and tranquility. the natural beauty of this world is sometimes awe-inspiring |
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Re: Time well spent by a Himalayan lake
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by Scarletrayne on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:43:57 PM AEST
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| Very nice, I like the imagery. Great write. |
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Re: Time well spent by a Himalayan lake
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by brew on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 07:51:13 PM AEST
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Well that was very vivid, and the images were remarkable. Didnt ever think..J incorrectly mis-spelled anything, but.......Nah I have never seen it.! Loved the write, as a "whole" wow, the himalayas...........What a site. ! Ihave only been to 2 sets of Moutains, one in Colorado, and the other In South Carolina.! Loved the write.
Brew~ |
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Re: Time well spent by a Himalayan lake
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 01:16:40 PM AEST
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A most exquisit and tranqual journey in2 the realm of oneness is the nature of this transendental peice, thank u 4 a most lovely
experience.
Ben |
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