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Where the Footpath Ends
Contributed by
Channing
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:46:40 PM in AEST
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There is a silent place
That people come to face
Where they go to make amends
It is where the footpath ends
A new life will begin
Maybe with less sin
They’ll take a new path
Hopefully with less wrath
Everyone deserves a second chance
To strike down the past with a lance
They should all get to begin
Where the footpath ends
-Channing-
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Channing
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2005-09-25 14:46:40]
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Re: Where the Footpath Ends
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by Scarletrayne on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:54:21 PM AEST
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| Haven't read many of your poems but I really liked this on, great job. |
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Re: Where the Footpath Ends
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by starry_eyed_soul on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:42:45 PM AEST
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| i really like this ... keep up the good work... |
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Re: Where the Footpath Ends
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 08:19:21 PM AEST
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Full of wisdom, loved it, good job, glad you found the real path, now don't get off of it. nice to be born again isnt it.
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Where the Footpath Ends
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by brew on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:55:33 PM AEST
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Not bad, found , now can travel where the right and light will give you all. Good write.
Brew~ |
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Re: Where the Footpath Ends
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by mjiann on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 11:43:26 PM AEST
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| really good. a lot put into few words |
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