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Contributed by
judasman
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:45:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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i hide behind my mask of hardness
not wanting people to see
my pain anger frustration grief
years of torment fill my mind
the endless yearning
the hate rejection brings
and now your'e laid to rest
never to be part of me again
i cry my solitary tears
quietly grieving to myself
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judasman
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2005-09-25 14:45:11]
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Re: no title
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by EverlastingDawn on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:00:57 PM AEST
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| That's a great poem/ So much passion that you draw the reader in. I hope you can find the light that you need right now. Good Write. |
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by Archie on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:02:12 PM AEST
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| This is good, I hope you get through what ever is going on in this poem. |
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by remote on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:17:56 PM AEST
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| Now this is nice heartfelt write. |
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:46:39 PM AEST
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THis was very nice to read
GODBLESS
BEBE
"years of torment fill my mind"
If you have faith inGod, it will be easier to get over the torment... ( I know 4rm personal exper..) I hope you start feeling better, and i will keep u in my prayers |
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