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The End
Contributed by
CBlake
on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:38:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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go ahead and judge me.
i don't care what you see.
look deep inside my twisted soul,
and see how little you mean to me.
**** with my mind,
my body and soul.
screw me up forever,
who cares if i'm whole?
don't you get it yet?
it doesn't matter what you do.
the only thing that just might hurt
is knowing i could never miss you.
maybe i'm a ****** person?
maybe i deserve to burn?
maybe you should lay off the assumptions
and face the fate you earned.
try to make me guilty.
try to make me cry.
it doesn't matter what you do;
no tears fall from these eyes.
so take the happy memories;
destroy them one by one.
hide them away within your mind;
come find me when you're done.
Copyright ©
CBlake
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2005-09-25 13:38:05]
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Re: The End
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by trini on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:45:28 PM AEST
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wow, i really liked it. your emotion ruled over the whole poem. great job, keep it up
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Re: The End
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by brew on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:11:22 PM AEST
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lots of inner emotion..maybe you should tell them face to face.yes, its hard, yet may make you feel better. Dont bottle, feelings...sometimes we hurt, more, when you do.!
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Re: The End
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:49:15 PM AEST
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So ful of emotion... i like:)
GODBLESS
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Re: The End
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:49:44 PM AEST
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So ful of emotion... i like:)
GODBLESS
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