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Hearts that Bleed
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:01:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Men of silence
Who keep this world hanging in the balance
With secrets yet to be told
A generation of scholars dieing and getting old
Who will follow now
When everything is lost
I am not a chamber
Lodged in my head are these thoughts
The way you sparkle
Eyes red like a torch
It is not by my decision, I was forced
I came to you for shelter, I was lost
You are not my folly
I am yours
Just outside the city gates
Lies a lion of a beast, hidden,
He waits for the human feast, bitten
As he clasps down his deadly teeth
He is not an animal
He has kids to feed
If not for his actions it would be his heart that bleeds
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Re: Hearts that Bleed
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by ForlornSapphire on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:48:25 PM AEST
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| A bit vague, but wonderfully written. Continue to develop your thoughts. Very nice! |
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Re: Hearts that Bleed
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by autumn_zephyr on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:03:31 PM AEST
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| Very nice. Great write, can't wait to see more. |
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Re: Hearts that Bleed
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by LostAmbition on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 02:42:56 AM AEST
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righteous thoughts
great metaphors for life
im liking how u wrote this! |
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Re: Hearts that Bleed
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:24:34 AM AEST
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Great flow going on here! I especially like the way you wrapped it up in the end. Sounds like a survival of the fittest type write...Very well done.
H.S. |
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Re: Hearts that Bleed
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 03:44:01 PM AEST
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This makes some sense to me for very personal reasons.
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