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Spirit Dancer
Contributed by
CrazyCowboy557
on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 11:57:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Fell in love as she was leaving
God gave me her to believe in
Got up the nerve after she was gone
Living my life, but living it all wrong
Stopped to smell roses after they were dead
Found myself, after loosing my head
Realized all the signs, miles after leaving
Took the wrong exit, now the lanes I'm weaving
Found a love, after the love had faded
Found a diamond, but the diamond was jaded
Gave her a ring, but the phone no longer rang
Sent her a bird, but the bird no longer sang
A moment too late in time
A moment too early to find
I kissed her, only a ghost remained
On my mind, all has been stained
Bought her food, the food was rotten
She was there, but the world has forgotten
Footprints all around this town
Left are memories no one has found
Earth and Venus collide with might
Getting drunk, getting high tonight
When I find the footprints in the snow
No one left, and no one came though
A ghost of a memory, of the past
Fast times, Slow motion, a final cast
Fishing in the lake of broken dreams
No silence tonight, only the screams
Reality calls, but I can't answer
No one can find, the spirit dancer
Copyright ©
CrazyCowboy557
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2005-09-25 11:57:24]
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Re: Spirit Dancer
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:27:31 PM AEST
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Hey Cowboy,
This is a touching and well written poem. I could relate and remember it is never to late to find love AGAIN
Hugs Leia36 |
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Re: Spirit Dancer
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by Archie on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:57:13 PM AEST
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| This is good. You said it so well in your poem that I really have nothing to add but good job. |
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Re: Spirit Dancer
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:52:46 PM AEST
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Very nice write... at first I was like, i dont really feel like reading this write now, but after like the 3rd line i just couldnt stop reading..:)
Good job
GODBLESS
BEBE |
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Re: Spirit Dancer
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by autumn_zephyr on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:02:42 PM AEST
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| Very sweet, I liked it, great write. |
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