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why
Contributed by
jambo
on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:04:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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why does my heart ache when ur gone,
why does my soul enrage when u go,
how can i live without out you,
when my love for u does flow,
ur looks just amaze me,
the sight of u makes my heart fill,
my heart belongs to you,
my love for u never still,
always there, my love constant,
loving u forever and always,
my soul calms when near u,
together our love always stays,
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2005-09-25 10:04:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: why
(User Rating: 1 ) by trini on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:28:10 PM AEST (User
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not bad, just keep the rhyming at the same pace overall good job. keep up the good work
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