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Insomnia InnerVisions
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:06:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Looked in the mirror
didn't recognise the face
and yesterday I crashed
couldn't remember my name
or the way
the way to find the time
to just relax and smile,
there's nothing I can do
to ever ease the pain.
I've been riding on a carousel
that is spinning
going round and round and round,
I got no one I know
who can help or has the time.
I think I miss
the kiss
of something to believe in
cause in this aimless existence
there's no meaning to life.
Always running up hill
so fast
but standing still
Insomnia
keeping me awake at night
I never really sleep anymore...
In Isolation tears of confusion
flow
as I am slowly fading,
I don't know where I belong
and no longer care to know.
I've been thinking
that's something's really wrong
I stumble and I stagger
this is my wreckage
this is what I've become,
never knowing what I really want
and don't you get too close
cause I'll run....
nothing eases the pain
when you don't belong.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-09-25 04:06:35]
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Re: Insomnia InnerVisions
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:44:25 AM AEST
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Oh, my friend,
This is so sad but well written.
I'm so sorry you feel this way.
Let me know if there's anything I can do to help.
Remember, smile, people will wonder what cha been up to.
luv, huggs, kisses,
emy |
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Re: Insomnia InnerVisions
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:35:04 PM AEST
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Secretewind,
This poem really got to me , I really am moved by this and can relate , my past always is in the back of my mind. I am here if you need to talk to someone, Again hauntingly sad and very well written
Hugs Leia36
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Re: Insomnia InnerVisions
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:24:06 PM AEST
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A very sad but honest write. I like this alot, and I'm sure many of us have felt this way at one time or another...I know I have, and hopefully in time, things will look up for you. Very well expressed piece.
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Re: Insomnia InnerVisions
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:51:25 PM AEST
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| an amazing poem, well done |
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