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If I were a rose
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:37:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If I were
If I were a poem that every one loved
You would be my words, my rhyme
If I were a song that could make every one smile
You would be my chorus, my notes
If I were a painting that made people think
You would be my colors, my brush strokes
If I were a shooting star and some one made a wish
You would be that wish, my wish
If I were a prayer that some one made every night
You would be the miracle, my angel
If I am special or handsome in any way it is only
Because I have you, I want to always have you
You are everything that is beautiful inside of me
You are my whole world, you are my everything
If I were a night time sky you would be my stars
I hide away the moon so you could shine your brightest
If I were a white rose that you picked and put to your lips
I would blush and turn red because you are so beautiful
If I we were stars in the night time sky
We would be the brightest constellation of all
Our love would shine brightly even by day
That is how you will always be to me
How I want us to always be
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Re: If I were a rose
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:46:36 AM AEST
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A beautifull write but why are u down, my friend?
huggs,
emy |
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Re: If I were a rose
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:08:34 AM AEST
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a very beautifl write, but i don';t understand why you are down? :S
luv
jenni
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Re: If I were a rose
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by Archie on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 08:44:51 AM AEST
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| I could make this into a song. You have a great heart for the one you love. 5 stars |
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Re: If I were a rose
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by trini on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:39:34 PM AEST
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amazing write, your love is strong. keep up the great work
-trini |
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Re: If I were a rose
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by brew on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:27:38 PM AEST
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Now what Archie, suggested , would be cool......have him make the lyrics, with the notes.and then you could give to your love..........What a neat sentitment, and an awful sweet one.! I know if anyone wrote, a song to me, or had one written, i would be in tears, and speechless.! Very elegant, write....and make it into a song.!
Brew~ |
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Re: If I were a rose
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by little_genna on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 03:13:57 AM AEST
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This would make a very good song, i know why you are so down hun. I love this poem so much and it reminds me about all the gd things love can do, but then all the hurt it can cause. I hope you realize that since you sent me that ring i have worn it every day and cant bare to be without it on.
Stace xxxxx |
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Re: If I were a rose
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:12:34 AM AEST
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| No Ifs..for you my friend, and you can apply this to the one who created you.. and you are everything you ask for.. the ifs then are yes... you are... yes, you are definately... the creation creating a poem from "Thee..creator"... no ifs.. you are... Raquel Leah :D |
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