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Refuge
Contributed by
darkhorse71
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:20:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In a world made up of loneliness
that's full of loss and rain,
I found what man is looking for,
a solace from the pain.
All the dung that I once lived for
has now been turned to gain.
My life of broken ruins
will never be the same.
I now have dreams to live for,
so many things to do.
What more is there to look for
then another day with you?
You changed me for the better,
so my life I give to you.
But this one thing I ask for -
that you always will be true.
Nothing is more beautiful
than two who are in love.
Their elegance is left unmatched
from earth to the heavens above.
So in this world of loneliness
if you and me are true,
we can add a little happiness
for those who are feeling blue.
darkhorse71
john
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darkhorse71
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Re: Refuge
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:25:49 AM AEST
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Wow!
U was a master poet even then.
Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Refuge
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:33:45 AM AEST
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That is marvelous! Very impressive for such a young age. Mine was in the 5th grade, lol:
I wish I was a butterfly
Flying high above
I 'd look at all below
Sending peace and love
My Mom still has it on her wall. I am saying how long ago either, but it is turning yellow if that gives any indication. : ) |
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Re: Refuge
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by remote on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 05:00:18 AM AEST
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| Pretty good for 10th grader. |
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Re: Refuge
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by Archie on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 08:55:12 AM AEST
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| Great poem. I think when a person falls in love they get a new perspective on life. This poem exemplifies that very well. |
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Re: Refuge
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by brew on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 12:54:37 PM AEST
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Not bad, at all. Very well penned for a 10th grader......I couldnt write like that , if i tried..at that age.! Enjoyed it.
Brew~ |
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Re: Refuge
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 04:28:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful! This is such a lovely optimistic poem. it's one of those
poems that just forces you to smile. Thanks for that. : ~) A love
sweetly expressed. Great write!
~Breezy |
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