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Life Revisited
Contributed by
darkhorse71
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:13:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The rusted nails fell from the knots
that ate into this heart of mine.
Weedy and worn, this empty patch
is now a meadow and feels so fine.
The gnarled limbs and twisted roots
are dying off each day.
The new green growth of tender shoots
is new life on the way.
I hear your voice call from within
as my soul cries out to you;
the strings that pull upon my heart
are in the hands of one so true.
If you will shoot into the dark
the arrows of your heart,
make a target of my chest
so we will never be apart.
Then all the pain that I now feel
will be lost with all that ails,
for sorrow cannot co-exist
in hearts where love prevails.
I would be free to live my life
and all its joys pursue,
for what is there that I should fear
except not being here with you?
darkhorse71
john
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2005-09-25 01:13:07]
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Re: Life Revisited
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:18:11 AM AEST
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Aww very sweet john, heartfelt, I'm glad you found someone, and I hope it works out. Great write, can't wait for more.
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Re: Life Revisited
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:18:20 AM AEST
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Very touching write.
A bit sad but written like a pro.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Life Revisited
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by MorningDove on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:19:59 AM AEST
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So very beautiful, John. To be able to live life again to it's fullest and live to love. I hope your wishes come true and you received the happiness you hope for.
Dove |
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Re: Life Revisited
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by brew on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 12:52:10 PM AEST
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Well, so the newness, of some happines.is on the way?! Well, good luck...you deserve all and more.! Wondeful write.
Brew~ |
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