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Slipping of Valueable................Time
Contributed by
brew
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Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:49:41 PM in AEST
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Time is there
Time is here
Once the clock ticks, its never to adhere
At the beginning, and not the end
Another place in time, and never a fear
We take the time what one has for granted
As we beleive, it wont be enchanted
But, dont waste, what one has given
It might take the time, and never forgiven
So when in doubt, you havent time for ONE
Take the whole heart, and make, it bond
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by Manda2 on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:53:27 PM AEST
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| Good write, well done. I think Time has had bad publicity, without it we would never move on and we would never get over anything. |
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:09:33 PM AEST
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True words, my friend.....
(Thank you)
Jenni |
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:11:03 PM AEST
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Time can be one's worst enemy. Yet there are times in my life I have wanted to have time stop and leave me in that moment forever.
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 11:14:22 PM AEST
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The clocks ticks away, you will never ever see that one precious second again, as it is past. So, yes, always do the best you can each second, and trust in the next second, everything will be alright.
Oh yes, we do take time for granted, and our days go by so fast. Time for us to slow down and concentrate on each second that we do live, and be so blessed if we live to see the next second.
****So when in doubt, you havent time for ONE
Take the whole heart, and make, it bond
Lovely ending to your poem, as I can see the metaphor used with the beats, ticking of the clock..
When the heart stops, our earth clock stops as well. Be prepared for heaven, the time there is not the same as here.. and if we do well here on earth, so will we even be much greater in heaven.
I love your write, very deep.
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 12:21:15 AM AEST
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This is a facinating poem brew read it twice
nice write interesting as well . . .
Ben
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by Darkhorse71 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:09:33 AM AEST
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Hey Super D!!! Point well taken. This was very interesting. Great write.
Hugs to ya, john |
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by remote on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 05:10:55 AM AEST
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| One more reason why I don't wear any watch. |
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 07:04:58 PM AEST
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A wonderfully crafted piece of poetry u have here Brew. I absolutely love the ending. A brilliant write. Keep penning girl!
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Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:23:25 AM AEST
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| good write from a good writer ,I likee... |
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:07:35 PM AEST
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| Great poem Brew!Those words are so true and wise.Everything revolves around"The Big clock"...waits for no one,and earth neva stops turning.When the sunsets...somewhere els, there's sunrise.Time,the essence of all!Thanx for sharing.Well done!!. |
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by StoneAngel on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:16:01 PM AEST
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| great write u should read my poem on time. think its similar. seems i write long peoms eh. oh well thanks for ur input on my 2 receint poems. |
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Re: Slipping of Valueable................Time
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 07:57:41 PM AEST
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| This is a good reminder to me and others to not waste our time feeling down, I say this for myself for i know that is what i do. My time is better spent encouraging others and making them smile. |
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