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Loving Thoughts
Contributed by
brew
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Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 06:44:54 PM in AEST
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Beautiful Mountains, Snow covered on top
A , A frame house, nestled beneath big oak trees
Out back, a yard that covers acres
On one side, its filled with plants of all sorts
On the other is has a tree swing, and differ flowers
Flowers of red, gold, purple, and whites
Like daffadills, tulips, and daisies
In the mist of all, it has smiling faces
A family that is so joyous, because they are surrounded, by all
Mom, in the kitchen with a peach pie in the window
Dad out in the pasture, getting ready to milk
Kids, all running and dancing in jubilee
What a fantastic, theme
To have a simple, yet wonderful life........with all the trimmings
All cares, and worries, gone where they wont be dwelled on
Just to have the warmth of loving thoughts
Copyright ©
brew
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2005-09-24 18:44:54]
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Re: Loving Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 07:03:08 PM AEST
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| Not bad a little too fuzzy for my liking though |
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Re: Loving Thoughts
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 12:35:42 AM AEST
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people tell me i'm lucky well, u r lucky sounds like my wifes family how she was raised, wow this brings tears to my eye's
u don't even wanna know how i was raised, this is beautiful what i'd give 4 that kind of family, beautiful poem brew, hit's home, the one i never had . . .
Ben |
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Re: Loving Thoughts
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by remote on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 05:55:40 AM AEST
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| Yes the description is a bit vague, but it's about the feelings and not details. Dwelling on past joy with sadness at the back of you mind for the present comes across quite well. |
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Re: Loving Thoughts
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by Darkhorse71 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 11:39:33 PM AEST
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I have to agree with BenPapa, this is what I grew up wishing for and never believing it existed. Luckily I found out later it does. You captured the wistfulness in a great way.
peace and hugs to ya, john |
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Re: Loving Thoughts
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:42:37 PM AEST
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| A warm & peaceful atmosphere created within this poem. |
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