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Love Always Hopes
Contributed by
anitajames
on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 05:27:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love, bring me the softness of another's caress
touching my hair, my lips, my breast.
Love, bring me the peace that's missing inside
driven out by my stubborn mind and my pride.
Love, bring me the trust I once held so dear
make all of my goodness and his again clear.
Love, bring me the heat of passion's embrace
let all of the joy of it shine on my face.
Love, bring me the love of another so dear
bring him, I swear I'll hold him for years.
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anitajames
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2005-09-24 17:27:22]
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Re: Love Always Hopes
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 12:03:23 AM AEST
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| A write like this is just what I needed to read at the moment. Nicely done with this one it covered a lot of aspects of love that I myself have struggled to write about. Nice write |
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Re: Love Always Hopes
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 08:07:33 AM AEST
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Again, well done. May love listen to your pleas.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Love Always Hopes
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:40:19 PM AEST
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You deserve alot more comments on your work Ann. I absolutely love this piece. The longing for love so evident and clear. May your heart find the true love that it deserves.
*hugs*
Sue |
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