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the real me
Contributed by
loura
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Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 05:25:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I want to cry
for this life full of lies,
for these days with no nights,
for these people with no sight.
Under this mask
of smiles and fake hapiness
the real me survives
hoping that one day
someone will take her away
to a new world where
sha can come out
and turn into the mask she always
envied.
Copyright ©
loura
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2005-09-24 17:25:52]
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Re: the real me
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by grim6669 on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 06:30:19 PM AEST
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| i like it. how long did it take you to write that? keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: the real me
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by Tru2Myself on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 06:38:58 PM AEST
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I know the feeling babe... trust me. I know it sucks... but keep up the writing... its a good way to actually say what you feel instead of keeping it locked up inside and faking happiness,
Lauren |
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