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A beautiful soul
Contributed by
seci
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Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:47:45 PM in AEST
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i lost so much and still i feel like i am still losing so much more
but i need you here beside me
to guide me and at times when i need you to hide me
everyone has seem to walk out of my life
promise that you won't walk out but in and protect me from what is wrong and right
it feels at times that i am walking a valley on my own
but i don't want to, i don't want to be a queen and don't have my king along with me sitting on our thrones
i love you
i never loved anyone as strong as you
i thought i did once, but that was once and that was a thought and now look
look what God has brought
i never been kissed by no one the way you kiss me
i never been loved the way you love me
but right now it feels wonderful
it feels so damn good to be loved by someone who can honestly love
my mother says i'm to young
yes young it may be
but i dont' care as long as you are here guiding me
never have i ever smiled the way i do
never have i ever gave my all to someone like you
money can't buy me love
so therefore its you that i value
like a butterfly my feelings for you day by day will unfold
i love you
i love you
i love you, so much and the way you have such a beautiful soul
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seci
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2005-09-24 14:47:45]
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Re: A beautiful soul
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by lostrelic on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 03:05:03 PM AEST
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very lovely write and love doesnt have an age to it just enjoy it
great write
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Re: A beautiful soul
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by brew on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 06:59:16 PM AEST
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No love doesnt need an age to do it, yet..........if your like.....below 18 and they are like in their 30's+..then I dont know what i would think, either.! Well, yes, I would say, its like um....not right.! That would be looking at a father figure........I think once you reach 18 , then love.....just do it for the right reasons, and all will fall in place.!
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Re: A beautiful soul
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by Davinah on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:05:15 AM AEST
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"i lost so much and still i feel like i am still losing so much more"
I can really relate to this... I too feel that way..;
Very nice write. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: A beautiful soul
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by Val-Hundra on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 11:23:59 PM AEST
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I can tell you definitely feel strongly about it. Love is love and it can't be changed, no matter the age. We can't help who we love, we just love them.
Tres bien. |
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