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Endless
Contributed by
Channing
on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:09:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Floating through and through the endless thoughts
Turn towards a road with a better end
The endless possibilities of life await
Make a cut or make a mend
Don’t give in to endless hate
Look it in the face and create a fate
Without the chrome crossing an endless soul
Suicide is for the weak and senseless fool
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2005-09-24 14:09:12]
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Re: Endless
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by dobad on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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| Starts very well and gives statement, but a bias ending steals all compassion from the writing. There are many reasons for suicide, value of life being only one. Learn understanding, and try again my friend. |
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Re: Endless
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by upomik on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:30:08 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: Endless
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by starry_eyed_soul on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:05:28 PM AEST
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| nice .. i like it |
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