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THE BOX
Contributed by
notwhatitseems
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Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:47:00 PM in AEST
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THE STONE COLD STAIR OF EYES THEY MAKE ME GRAY
I CAN NOT THINK THE BOX FILLS MY HEAD WITH
IDIOTIC
THOUGHTLESS
USELESS
SENSELESS
TRIVIAL IDEAS
TURN IT OFF
SO IT WILL STOP
SO I WILL NOT STOP
THE BOX IS EVERYWHERE
TRAPPED IN THE BOX I AM
AND I HATE IT
I TRIP OVER THE CORDS
AND FALL ON MY FACE
I MUST FINISH STANDING
DO NOT LET THE BOX EXIST IN YOUR HEAD
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2005-09-24 13:47:00]
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Re: THE BOX
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:02:14 PM AEST
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| I would have said the box was telivision until you said the box is every where. Now I think it is the things that influence us that we don't want to. |
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Re: THE BOX
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by reecy on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 08:02:26 AM AEST
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the capitals are slightly intrussive.. however the poem was fantastic loved it.. liked the way your not really sure what the box is but it doesnt really have any relevance as we understand the poem nyway!
keep writing
lau |
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Re: THE BOX
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by zealousnatalie on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:02:43 PM AEST
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HA HA HA
Hey you! I love this poem...
You are truly an inspirational writer, and even more, an inspirational human being!
Keep being DIFFERENT!
Love, ZN
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