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Queen Bee
Contributed by
Alina
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Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 12:33:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Cant take her word for it
Lying in helpless ****
Vomit in her hair
I know she cant quit
But I believed her
Found her soul and freed her
She still found the fix
And now I cant feel her
She wants to clean her wings
Fly through meadow springs
But she's ripped and dirty
She's Queen; amongst the druggie fly kings.
Copyright ©
Alina
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2005-09-24 12:33:32]
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Re: Queen Bee
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by In_a_while on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 12:46:37 PM AEST
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It's haunting and very graphic as well. I'm especially taken by the last stanza which is full of great imagery!
Keep up the fine writing!
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Re: Queen Bee
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:00:55 PM AEST
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Well all I can say is wow!
I'm actually not surpried by the poem as much as by a person who sees their condition if this is indeed you who you are writing about. |
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Re: Queen Bee
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:19:10 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this poem. It's very visual, and quite deep. |
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Re: Queen Bee
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by ArsenicMyst on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:01:25 PM AEST
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so very well written ...
your poem defines the brutal struggle and reality within,
and in between caring friend and addict
*.¸.·´¨arsenic
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Re: Queen Bee
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by dobad on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 04:14:08 PM AEST
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| I have known and loved her, but lost her to a power greater than I. Her passion claimed her. Good write |
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