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Queensland Dreams
Contributed by
Mysticpoet
on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 06:11:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The sea is so calm today,
Waves barely make a sound.
There's a soft gentle breeze,
Not many people around.
Sun is shining brightly,
You can feel the heat,
The sand feels warm and moist
on your feet.
Is this paradise or am I
Living a dream?
Is life as magical or a good
as it seems?
I feel I can see the wonderous
Mysteries of the deep;
Is this paradise, or am I
still asleep?
In the distance there are
Islands with trees galore.
All this magis just
Outside our door.
You hear the birds singing
in the canopies of the trees,
Kookaburras, parrots, flying
wild and free.
If I'm still asleep. I hope
this dream never ends.
What other wonders are
around the next bend?
Rainforests, waterfalls,
There's so much to see.
The mountains in the distance--
If I'm asleep, let me be.
Copyright ©
Mysticpoet
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2005-09-24 06:11:53]
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Re: Queensland Dreams
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by maestar on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:05:27 AM AEST
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this is so good.
it has been a long time since i've read a happy poem on this site.
loved it. |
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Re: Queensland Dreams
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:19:29 AM AEST
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| You have given us a very picturesque poem. I feel like I am there walking on the beach too. |
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Re: Queensland Dreams
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by rie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:52:47 AM AEST
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| brings back memories of my last visit to queensland, i enjoyed this poem. |
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Re: Queensland Dreams
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by cetblue on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 02:17:06 PM AEST
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| You used some nice imagery, and I think you picked a good rhyme scheme that corresponded with the happy tone of your poem. Good job! |
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