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Destroying Agony
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 03:45:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In agony
Approaching Death
Destroys your hopes
Constricts your breath
A choking hold
Upon your throat
Ears resonate
With piercing note
Your spirit crushed
In Fate’s vile hand
Your heart concedes
It can’t withstand
I pick up Death
From off your back
And cast him far
Back to his hell
Down by your side
I kneel, I fall
I will to take
Your every pain
I hold you close
As your heart’s tears
Mingled with blood
Come stain my soul
I raise your head
And hold it close
Close to my chest
Close to my heart
You cry the tears
You thought you lost
Release the fears
That held them in
And in your eyes
A hope is born
To face a life
That threw you out
Now stand up tall
And walk with hope
And know that I
Have got your back
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Re: Destroying Agony
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by ArsenicMyst on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 04:37:44 AM AEST
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this is a wonderful write ...
and for that reason, one could get picky.
but since you are satisfied with it, i am too ...
so let the gods of poetry uneasily ruffle their feathers
in the knowledge of that acceptance ...
*´¨` ·.¸¸. arsenic
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Re: Destroying Agony
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by remote on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 07:23:29 AM AEST
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| Nice one for friends. |
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Re: Destroying Agony
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 08:33:07 AM AEST
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| That is awesome; I think you have a great heart. I am comforted by your poem. |
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Re: Destroying Agony
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by maestar on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:23:31 AM AEST
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very good write.
i liked the different tipes of poetry in each verse well done. |
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Re: Destroying Agony
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:05:27 AM AEST
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In agony
Approaching Death
Destroys your hopes
Constricts your breath
A choking hold
Upon your throat
Ears resonate
With piercing note
Your spirit crushed
In Fate’s vile hand
Your heart concedes
It can’t withstand
I pick up Death
From off your back
And cast him far
Back to his hell
Down by your side
I kneel, I fall
I will to take
Your every pain
I hold you close
As your heart’s tears
Mingled with blood
Come stain my soul
I raise your head
And hold it close
Close to my chest
Close to my heart
You cry the tears
You thought you lost
Release the fears
That held them in
And in your eyes
A hope is born
To face a life
That threw you out
Now stand up tall
And walk with hope
And know that I
Have got your back |
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Re: Destroying Agony
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:48:24 PM AEST
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You bring so much comfort and ease to ur friend's hearts. You know the exact write words to encourage them and get them back on their feet. I'm enjoying this journey through the path of ur life. It's been an incredible experience. You are a genuine, kind and caring sweet guy.
May happiness and joy always be part of ur heart, for u always bring joy and happiness to others through ur work.
*hugs* from ur fan,
Sue |
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