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Un-named
Contributed by
Seikjo
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Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:22:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Moon glow bright and sweep away my sorrow, because I have no tomorrow.
Let my soul rest for one day so the fear in my heart doth say nay.
Moon tell me of my life, I know it’s filled with strife.
But let this day be peaceful for my soul.
Wake me up from the terrible dreams that hold me with sorrow seams. Let me wake wake up from the never ending sea.
Sun I see you now with your tender arms that I am forever torn from.
Help me to find my voice, so that I can sigh.
So that I can finally rise up and see all that was me.
Sun let your rays help me to find a way through my dream maze, and led me to the month of May’s.
Wake me up from the terrible dreams that hold me with sorrow seams. Let me wake from the never ending sea.
Finally peace clutches my breast so that I can finally rest. And finally no longer dream and finally find my mean.
Copyright ©
Seikjo
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2005-09-23 23:22:10]
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Re: Un-named
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by brownxeyesxhypnotize on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:44:27 PM AEST
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| Hey just thought I'd let you know that I really like this poem. Its pretty good. Keep up the good work!!!!!! |
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Re: Un-named
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:21:48 AM AEST
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| You did a good job here. I think the repitition of dream takes away from your poem, but it is creative. |
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