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Love Is..
Contributed by
JustAGirl001
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Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:39:39 PM in AEST
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Love is,
the crimson red blood at your feet.
Love is,
The greatest defeat.
You think you've got it,
And then it's gone,
It doesn't last,
For very long.
Before you know it,
You're in his arms,
Away from all,
Of life's harms.
But wait a while,
And then you'll see,
That unloved,
Is all you'll be
Copyright ©
JustAGirl001
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2005-09-23 21:39:39]
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Re: Love Is..
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:46:04 PM AEST
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| wow this is a very emotional poem...i like it...keep it up |
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Re: Love Is..
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 10:40:44 PM AEST
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And yet - and yet -
it is better to have loved and lost than not have loved at all.
I posted myself something on this subject, just nowbut am afraid it might contradict yo.r
beautiful verses.
And yet - and yet -
it is better to have loved and lost than not have loved at all.
Evviva l"Amore!
Elizabeth |
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Re: Love Is..
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by brownxeyesxhypnotize on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:55:32 PM AEST
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| this touched me deep.....i keep gettin screwed over and i feel your pain, im still trying to get over it. keep up the good work! |
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Re: Love Is..
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:10:45 AM AEST
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Very emotional. When people hurt me i am tricked into believing that but the true balance for a broken heart is forgiveness, that is also the true test of love. Where there is no forgiveness only anger and disunity remain.
Good write. |
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Re: Love Is..
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by justme03 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 11:36:36 AM AEST
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so beautiful and touching! i feel the pain in this.
great write! absolutly amazin! lylas |
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Re: Love Is..
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by reecy on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 12:12:57 PM AEST
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wow your poem is very clear. And i have to say everyhting you say i agree with however i would love to hear more.its so good its a shame to stop so early with it.. it seems almost un finished
fantastic write though! |
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Re: Love Is..
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by reecy on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 12:26:08 PM AEST
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wow your poem is very clear. And i have to say everyhting you say i agree with however i would love to hear more.its so good its a shame to stop so early with it.. it seems almost un finished
fantastic write though! |
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