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Today I Found Out...
Contributed by
Elayner27
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Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 07:54:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I found that it only gets worse from here.
I found that in the end, you'll loose everything dear.
And ‘happily-ever-after' is only in children stories.
That you can't patch it all with 'I'm sorry's
I found that love is just a state of mind.
I found that fate isn't something that's pre-signed.
And that people will lie for the smallest things.
That most 'relationships' are just flings.
I found that waiting leads to failure
I found that you won't live forever.
And you'll lose more friends that you keep.
That secrets will be told no matter how deep.
I found that you can loose your life in a book.
I found that everyone deserves a second look.
And that in life there are many doors.
That there are many meanings of TRUTH, find yours.
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Elayner27
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Re: Today I Found Out...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 08:09:47 PM AEST (User
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Yep there are a lot of truths in this poem.
The heart gets broken again and again before it finds true love. In the end it is those closest to you who hurt you the most. Yet I had rather get my heart broken then to wonder why i live life alone. |
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Re: Today I Found Out...
(User Rating: 1 ) by WAE on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:06:33 PM AEST (User
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Well, I do not completly agree with your point. There isn't singular truth in anything. Besides life is zebra-like: black-white-black-white... So you hope...
Best wishes,
Alex |
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Re: Today I Found Out...
(User Rating: 1 ) by brownxeyesxhypnotize on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 12:04:58 AM AEST (User
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good poem, ur talented and you should keep writing. i enjoyed reading this!! |
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Re: Today I Found Out...
(User Rating: 1 ) by SurenderRose on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 07:48:42 PM AEST (User
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i love your poem it has a deep feeling to it.a feeling dat can help us think at the end of the day |
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