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To the Grave
Contributed by
NoangelNohope
on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 06:33:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A quickened pace leads
to sudden falls
Tumblings which
crush bones filled
with hope
leaking out only to
ooze through a world
of sleep where
a dream that never
came true died
in the grave, along
with its host who
drew colder with every
empty breath she took.
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NoangelNohope
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2005-09-23 18:33:53]
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Re: To the Grave
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:07:05 AM AEST
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| This is pretty good. You have definately given me a few writing ideas from your poem. |
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Re: To the Grave
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by expired_promises on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:21:34 PM AEST
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| perfect metaphor choice |
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Re: To the Grave
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 12:28:08 PM AEST
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I applaud
from the shadows
as footsteps
echo down the hall...
your room awaits your presence. |
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