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All Heaven's Birds
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 04:16:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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One more night of this bleeding
inside, carefully i'm needing
the whispers you keep and will not confide
All hours of night i sigh in my silence
Just a lamp's light is my life's defiance
I heard you were thinking, of drowning in sadness
But it's tiresome to weep when fun lies in madness
One more night of no happy
inside, i wish a bullet would slap me
to wake me from life and it's lie
All hours of day i pray with no words
My God is a bottle that drowns heaven's birds
I heard you were tired, of life and it's choices
Just pick your poison neverminding the voices
All day long i'm sleeping gone
all day long i'm weeping dawn
all day long... bottles gone.
dw
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Re: All Heaven's Birds
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 08:35:38 AM AEST
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| an amazing write, im suprised no one has commented yet! |
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Re: All Heaven's Birds
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by Alina on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 12:28:07 PM AEST
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Hmmm...I love all your stuff...this one has me still thinking.None the less is was good and the best and most deep line was "My God is a bottle that drowns Heaven's birds..."
KEEP IT UP
ALINA BRUNELLE
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Re: All Heaven's Birds
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by ArsenicMyst on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:39:05 PM AEST
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i read these just ... words and words last nite
and still this morning they linger in my brain
like a lyrical sonata ...
.¸.·´¨¨arsenic
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Re: All Heaven's Birds
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by reecy on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 07:57:09 AM AEST
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wow, that really is a amazing write!
truelly beutifull. not easy to write i can imagine!
will definatly look for more poems written by you!
reecy * |
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Re: All Heaven's Birds
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by jeza on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 08:19:23 PM AEST
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this poem is really good
fantastic even
jeza |
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