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LOVE WINS THE DAY
Contributed by
ROBERT_EDGAR_BURNS
on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 03:15:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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N THE HEAVEN’S ABOVE OR THE EARTH BELOW,
THERE IS NO DISTANCE I WOULD NOT GO,
TO STAND BEFORE YOU AND BEHOLD YOUR FACE,
GAZING IN YOUR EYES, SUCH A WONDERFUL PLACE!
TO FEEL THE TINGLING OF YOUR DAINTY TOUCH,
FROM YOUR SOFT SMOOTH HANDS THAT I LOVE SO MUCH.
AND TASTE THE NECTAR OF YOUR MOIST SWEET LIPS,
AS FINE WINE ON A PALATE BEGS FOR MANY SIPS.
THEN ENJOY THE MUSIC OF YOUR FEMININE VOICE,
LEADING ME TO THE EDGE, WHERE I HAVE NO CHOICE,
BUT TO SPREAD MY WINGS FREED FROM THEIR COCOON,
AND GLIDE ON THE WINDS LEADING STRAIGHT TO YOU!
MY HEART IS FOREVER AND ALWAYS WITH YOU,
FOR YOU ARE MY TREASURE, NOTHING ELSE IS AS TRUE.
NO MATTER THE OBSTACLES THAT HAVE COME OUR WAY,
IF WE SHARE THEM TOGETHER, THEN LOVE WINS THE DAY!
robertburns2@mac.com
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2005-09-23 15:15:21]
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Re: LOVE WINS THE DAY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 04:03:47 PM AEST
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Very nice poetry, pleasing to the eye, very decorated words.
I have never read your work before, it is very nice.
Thank you,
Raquel Leah |
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Re: LOVE WINS THE DAY
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by remote on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 04:19:51 PM AEST
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Nice one.
Capital letters signify loud angry shout, spoils the feel of the poem. |
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Re: LOVE WINS THE DAY
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by WAE on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 05:17:54 PM AEST
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Very sweet and romantic... Only suggestion is upper case...
Good luck,
Alex |
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Re: LOVE WINS THE DAY
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:32:09 PM AEST
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| This is so lovely. I remember love, I just can't remember what it feels like anymore. |
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